Saturday, 24 April 2021

Story - The Phone Call

Peter was alone at home and suddenly the phone rang….

Peter Smith was a young boy of 14, he lived in the suburbs of sunny Goa. He was a tall, rather skinny, freckled lad with wispy brown hair, big brown eyes and a round face. He was quite a normal kid; nothing remarkably different about him. Average marks, average life etc. That was until that day, where his life would change forever.

That day Peter’s parents had left him alone at home to do some adult task Peter didn’t ask about. It was a gray Sunday afternoon, Peter’s parents were to return the following day. He had been feeling a little off that day, he felt something in the air, sort of like an evil omen. But he just shrugged it off thinking it was just the gloomy weather.

At about 7pm Peter decided to plug in a movie, he was quite focused in the movie and wasn’t really aware of his surroundings. That was until the phone rang. The sound of the telephone filled the whole house and became louder and louder. Peter was surprised by the call, he wasn’t really expecting anyone. He didn’t have many friends who would want to call him.

Reluctantly, Peter paused the movie and went to pick up the phone. Then suddenly he got a chill; like somebody had poured ice water down his shirt. He chose to ignore it yet again and finally picked up the call. When he answered the call he heard nothing, absolute silence. “Hello?” Peter said, and then suddenly he heard a high – pitched, shrill giggle from the other end and then the other person hung up. Thinking it was a prank call of some sort, but somewhere inside he knew it was much more than that.

Peter checked the call log; and he was completely taken aback. It was the landline in his parent’s room!

Now Peter was scared, very scared. He wasn’t one to believe in ghosts, but now his mind started thinking otherwise. He went up the stairs to his parent’s room, with each step the stair would creak. It seemed that time was moving in slow – motion.

He finally reached his parent’s room. He softly opened the door, Peter was sweating buckets now. Inside he saw pitch – black darkness. He put his hand on the light switch and felt another bony, scaly hand there...

43 comments:

  1. Amazing story... Very spooky. But, I hate a cliffhanger!! Please write a sequel where you END the story :)

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  2. Ah an open ended story.. nice and very well written. I am spooked!

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  3. Proud of you at the age of 12..u have written very well.. Congratulations for the first blog and wishing you all the best for your future writings

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  4. Omggg that's my girl I cant get over this😱😱brooo u need to write moree plsssss

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  5. Wonderful. πŸ‘ πŸ€—

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  6. Amazing..!! Waiting for the next one already.. keep it up..!

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    1. thank you so much! sequel is in the works!

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  7. An amazing piece written...
    Keep it up girl!!
    Eagerly waiting for the next part

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    1. thank you! you wont have to wait to long!!😁

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  8. Very engaging content Akshara, looking forward for next story, keep it up!!
    -Namrata Desai

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  9. Very nice. Congratulations and keep it up. Waiting for your next..

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    1. thank you! so happy you liked it!😊

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  10. Amazing. Congratulations. Can't imagine.
    Keep writing and improve to become professional blogger and story writer.
    God bless you

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  11. Amazing story, love it, nice work!!!

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  12. Well done little writer! You're on your way to become a literary star!! Let your pen spill out many more such gems.. Rock on.. write on..! ;-)

    Mitesh

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    1. thank you!!! i really appreciate your words so much!!1

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  13. thank you so much everyone for all you love an support! please let me know if you have any ideas of prompts for the next one!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ’–

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  14. Very nice story... Waiting for Next

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  15. Beautiful story Akshara... keep up the good work..proud of you,keep growing star

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  16. So exciting Akshara! Can't wait for part 2! Lots of love❤️

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  17. Wonderful Akshara....very well written..excellent job!!!keep going😊😊😊

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  18. Hey Excellent. very nice Akshara. Keep it up.

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  19. thank you! really appreciate it!

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  20. Good going beta..!!

    Simple but effective & relevant choice of words.
    Nice way to keep suspense intact.
    Woven the plot nicely.

    Liked it overall.

    My suggestion, take your time to maintain originality and your hobby will soon turn into passion.

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Story - The Phone Call: Part 2

 .. Peter put his hand on the light switch and he felt another bony scaly hand there. Out of shock Peter flicked the light switch to ON. H...